A Warm and Pleasant Hum: A One-Shot for Trophy Dark

Have you considered an update with the restructuring of incursion page layout in the Trophy Dark final release?

This was a fantastically atmospheric body horror game with evocative set dressing and writing, and the soundtrack is just perfect. I really liked the upfront expectation that our characters were probably all going to fail horribly, so we could just focus on making it interesting. It made it much easier to stay immersed in the storytelling headspace as our characters kept getting more and more beaten down. I also appreciated the many opportunities for fleshing out our stories at the end of each scene.

That said, one mechanic felt a little incohesive. The game keeps suggesting you should backstab each other, but none of our characters were incentivized to backstab each other (at least...not before acquiring the treasure) because backstabbing would only have lessened our already very slim survival chances.

If you really wanted to have backstabbing in the game, you could constrain the character goals to be more actively in conflict. For example:
- one person is set on killing the queen, another person wants to control the living hive
- believing a myth that you can buy safe passage by giving up another party member
- there isn't enough of some key resource to keep everyone safe

Of course, you could also just do what our party did, and work together staunchly until the horrifying end.

I also noticed that things felt more fun when the GM gave us time limits by making the situation more dangerous if we were taking too long to come up with an excessively reasonable plan.

I'm not familiar with Trophy Dark, so I can't speak to how well this works within the context of the system, but this is a wonderfully well made module, dense and atmospheric, that's also perfectly useable for other stripped-down adventure-games like Into The Odd or Mausritter---although it may take a little bit of fiddling to properly convert it.

Probably the most striking thing about Hum is the writing, which uses an extremely effective poetic voice that makes it really satisfying to read, although it's also a little tricky to just skim for relevant info. Everything in the nine page pamphlet is extremely well-described and immersive, and it overall paints a very clear picture of lush, bee-related horror.

And it is horror, even though it's framed as an adventure, thanks to the eerie, lurid tone that permeates everything.

So if you like to be unsettled, this is worth picking up for that reason alone.

If you want to run it, well, it convinced me to buy a copy of Trophy Dark, and that's probably the best approach, but if you're willing to sit down and sketch out a few maps and encounters, you can absolutely convert this into an extremely flavorful d20 or osr adventure as well.

I would strongly recommend this to anyone whose GMing style revolves around building atmosphere,  as well as to fans of horror fiction.